Over the break, I’ve been reading a lot of Ian McEwan: Amsterdam, Atonement, and Sweet Tooth (I’ve also read his Saturday and Chesil Beach). Over his career, especially in his earlier ears, he has written many grisly and tragic scenes but also observed many moments of sweetness and love. His sentences are filled with acute observations described with jewel-like care, and his tone is often ringing like a Chopin ballade.
Take this scene from Amsterdam where a man (Vernon) visits the home shared by recently deceased friend (Molly) and her husband (George); Molly and Vernon were lovers twenty-five years ago:
Take this scene from Amsterdam where a man (Vernon) visits the home shared by recently deceased friend (Molly) and her husband (George); Molly and Vernon were lovers twenty-five years ago:
“In the semidarkness, during the seconds it took George to fumble for the light switch, Vernon experienced for the first time the proper impact of Molly’s death—the plain fact of her absence. The recognition was brought on by familiar smells that he had already started to forget—her perfume, her cigarettes, the dried flowers she kept in the bedroom, coffee beans, the bakery warmth of laundered clothes. He had talked about her at length, and he had thought of her too, but only in snatches during his crowded working days, or while drifting into sleep, and until now he had never really missed her in his heart, or felt the insult of knowing he would never see or hear her again. She was his friend, perhaps the best he had ever had, and she had gone. He could easily have made a fool of himself in front of George, whose outline was blurring even now. This particular kind of desolation, a painful constriction right behind his face, above the roof of his mouth, he hadn’t known since childhood, since prep school. Homesick for Molly. He concealed a gasp of self-pity behind a loud adult cough.
The place was exactly as she had left it the day she finally consented to move to a bedroom in the main house, to be imprisoned and nursed by George. As they passed the bathroom, Vernon glimpsed a skirt of hers he remembered, draped over the towel rail, and a towel and a bra lying on the floor. Over a quarter of a century ago she and Vernon had made a household for almost a year, in a tiny rooftop flat on the rue de Seine. There were always damp towels on the floor then, and cataracts of her underwear tumbling from the drawers she never closed, a big ironing board that was never folded away, and in the one overfilled wardrobe dresses, crushed and shouldering sideways like commuters on the metro. Magazines, makeup, bank statements, bead necklaces, flowers, knickers, ashtrays, invitations, tampons, LPs, airplane tickets, high-heeled shoes—not a single surface was left uncovered by something of Molly’s, so that when Vernon was meant to be working at home, he took to writing in a cafe along the street. And yet each morning she arose fresh from the shell of this girly squalor, like a Botticelli Venus, to present herself, not naked, of course, but sleekly groomed, at the offices of Paris Vogue.”
Amsterdam is a novel with a grisly denouement, which, to be honest, I skimmed over, but the combination of scenes like the above and biting social satire (of British politics and the press) made the novel a great pleasure.
PS: As I wrote this, I thought about McEwan’s consistently jewel-like diction in comparison with say the tone quality with which Mozart and Chopin’s piano music is usually played. In a way, McEwan's diction is more like the consistent ringing tone of Mozart (brought out, said Georgy Sandor and Anton Rubinstein among others, by a certain softness in the wrist) compared to Romantic music like Chopin’s, which is typically played with a mixture of a ringing tone and a dryer, more percussive tone brought out by stiffness in the wrist. And yet there’s wild cataracting tactile passion in McEwan that I more readily associate with Chopin, which not say that there is no depth in a Mozart fantasia. Perhaps the tactile passion of timbre stirs my guts while the passion of dissonance stores my emotional brain in an equally profound but different way.